getting the ending right

*Warning, this post may contain a spoiler to the ending of The Scion of Abacus. I don’t think it really is one, but read at your own risk.*

I have to share this story as it is the resolution to a problem that has been plaguing me for a while now. I mentioned a few weeks back that I was having trouble with the ending to The Scion of Abacus, that I was working on trying to get it just right.

Well, I received more feedback, and it seems that my changes made it even worse. My sister, who’s been a great help throughout the writing of Scion, went so far as to tell me that she’d stopped reading until I fixed all the problems.

It just wasn’t working.

And she was right. The ending I had written and was attempting to polish was rubbish. It was a copout. A sure-fire way to making all those who’ve followed Toven’s story thus far hate me forever and ever. Amen.

I spent almost two hours talking it over with my mother, getting her thoughts, bouncing ideas off of her. And I know I’ve got it right now. How do I know that?

It made her cry tears of many, conflicting emotions.

So, Scion 6 is looking like a May 11 release, and I think you’re going to like it.

The Scion of Abacus, Part 2 Published

Part two of my ongoing serial novel, The Scion of Abacus, has now been published and is available for download at Amazon.

I have decided to take advantage of Amazon’s new KPD Select programme, and am in the process of pulling the first volume of the serial from Apple, BN, and Sony. This is a decision I have arrived at after much thought–and a bit of consultation of Joe Konrath’s New Year’s Resolutions for Writers:

Take more risks.

So, instead of going down the trodden path of the first novels, I am going to see what the KDP Select fuss is all about so I can form my own opinion.

Also, I have uploaded new art for The Ossian Chronicles. The number one reason for this is to create a more uniform look among all my novels, close enough to identity a single author but not so close as to mistake them for a single series. There were other thoughts involved, such as the aforementioned risk-taking, and a study of recent trends towards symbolism and stylization in fantasy cover design. Again, this took some thought, and was not merely a change for change’s sake. Also, I am beginning work on an omnibus edition of the three books, and wanted to take advantage of some things the new covers give me to create the omnibus edition’s cover. More info on this will be forthcoming.

Finally, this week will see a new book review of Kirk Yuras’ Time of the Awakening, as well as the first essay in my proposed series on Ursual Le Guin’s A Wizard of Earthsea. That should be up sometime tomorrow.

The Scion of Abacus: evolution of a book cover

With the release date for the first part of The Scion of Abacus fast approaching, I have had my hands full getting final bits and pieces ready. I spent a great deal of time in November redesigning the book cover for the novel once I decided to publish as a serial novel as opposed to a duology or trilogy. I’m going to talk a bit about the journey of creating the cover, throw up some images, and then unveil the final cover design for the serial volumes at the bottom (and, yes, that does mean that there will be a separate design for the final, collected version, whereas each of the serial volumes will bear essentially the same cover).

So, this is a familiar first cover design I had planned for the novel back in the days when it was still going to be split into two volumes. I’ve placed what was my initial concept for the cover of the second volume below. Credit where it’s due, the first concepts here were inspired by the Kindle editions of Tolkien’s novels, though I got a little fancy by placing an alien script behind the main image. I liked this effect, and it highlights the importance of writing and books within the novel.

The phoenix represented on the first cover obviously pairs with the key title word “scion,” as well as with one of the key plot points in the novel: the resurrection of a great power. The lion and wolf on the second cover pair with the key word “tyrants,” implying the power struggle that becomes the focus for the second half of the story. Let it be stated, however, that I was never as satisfied with the second cover’s image as with that of the first, though I’m not sure I can quite place my finger on why that is.

As you can see, I had an idea for a common design from the beginning, and since color is important in the story, I figured I would use different hues volume to volume. Indeed, this idea held true when I began revising the covers when I was thinking of splitting the story into a trilogy of books.

Once I settled on the serial novel, I began to play with the idea of a single image, the only differences being the colors, again tying these to the colors represented in the novel itself. I added titles to individual sections of the serial novel, something I later decided to remove. Also, you can see that at this stage, the full novel was still bearing the former series title The Confessions of Toven Bakkis, a title I still like but one I decided to eschew in favor of a more typical fantasy title.

Further evolution of the covers took place under the guise of experimenting with the use of different images. I attempted to do away with the raised silver image, but I was quite unsatisfied with the results. In the meantime, I stumbled across a wonderful font by Peter Rempel called PR Uncial, a painstakingly reconstructed Roman-style uncial that I absolutely loved, and which quickly replaced the block letter style I was using before.

I knew I was getting close to something I really liked, and I still absolutely love the blue on black background with the alien script running beneath. This is likely to be the direction in which the final series cover will go, but I was after something a bit more eye-catching for the serial volumes, something that seemed to pop off the page–or from the screen, as it were–a bit more. The first thing I did was play with the colors overlaying the letters and image, but the effect was minimal at best. I did some more digging on Amazon, and stumbled across some really neat covers for Scott Bakker’s early novels, and I was immediately drawn by the color and lighting effects. A bit of playing around with such things, and I arrived at this, the final version, which I unveil now:

Free “Wrath” and New Year’s Resolutions

The Wrath of Kings and Princes, the second novel in The Ossian Chronicles, is now free at Smashwords. The promotion should trickle through to iTunes and Barnes & Noble in the next few days, and hopefully Amazon will list it for free early in the new year. I plan to leave this book free indefinitely.

The first part of The Scion of Abacus, my new serial novel, will be available for sale early next week, and I will be unveiling the final cover for the book very soon. As with all my other books, I designed the cover myself, and it seems to be well-received by all who have seen it.

I’m not one for writing self-help blogs, but I have been asked for advice on designing covers, and while I am no graphic artist, I do have some thoughts that I will look to share in the next few weeks now that I have time off to get back to the regular upkeep of the website.

I have done a lot of thinking in the recent weeks that I’ve not been able to update the blog, and I have decided on a few changes around here. I will pretty much cease doing any book reviews. I have one or two more still to do that I have promised to others, but I simply feel I am not drawing much useful traffic to the site in writing them, and I have often ended up reading books that I would not have read otherwise (and I mean that in the negative sense, not the serendipitous one–with my reading time becoming increasingly precious, I simply wish to read for fun and not because I feel forced to). I may recommend books in the future, but for now this is simply the best solution for my own conflicted mind in the matter.

Also, while the podcasts have proven popular with those who have listened to them, there have been far too few listeners relative to the amount of time spent recording and editing, and so I think that project will halt for the foreseeable future. However, I do plan to put all that good experience to use in the new year as I intend to produce an audio version of my new novel once the final version is completed. I think the voice of the main character is better suited to my own than the third-person narration of the Ossian Chronicles series.

What will I be writing to fill up space here then? In a nutshell, I don’t know, but I have some ideas along the lines of more discussion about fantasy technique, cliches, and so forth, and I may even venture into writing posts that are not too dissimilar to the podcast itself. But time shall tell.

In short, this is a time of transition for me. When I began the website, I was merely teaching part time, and fortunate to have that job. I have been blest to receive a heavier teaching schedule at the university, but the tradeoff has been a serious decline in the amount of time I have to spend here or elsewhere–I have basically been dead to Twitter since mid-September (which may mean I’m primed for a Facebook appearance [watch this space]). Still, I will hopefully be able to bring things under some sort of control and do a finer job of time management in 2012.

That, at least, will be my New Year’s resolution

site redesign and new book/s coming

As you may be able to tell (if you’ve visited this site more than once before), I am currently in the process of shuffling things around here: setting up a static front page and slowly paring away some of the unnecessary clutter that has hung around far too long.

There are two reasons for this, and in a way they are not unrelated:

Firstly, I am entering that period of the semester when I expect to have a negative amount of time to do anything constructive over here, so I feel a static home page would simply look better than having some outdated post from weeks of yore greet those who stumble upon my site. I do not expect to have time to dedicate fully to writing reviews again (bar one which I hope to have up this week) or to recording podcasts until the solstice, at least, by which time I’ll have submitted my final grades, and so forth.

Secondly, after many months of battling against time management skills that would make a college freshman blush (and I know because I teach them!), I am nearing a new release. This is not something I’ve made public yet, so now is as good a time as any:

When I first began writing The Scion of Abacus, I was planning it as the first volume of a duology, which was simply a story I had planned to break in two because it was far too long for one volume, I felt. Well, because of some problem’s I’ve had, I’ve not progressed as far as I’d hoped, but I’d also begun to realize that splitting the book in two was simply an arbitrary way to deal with an enormous story, and so I could easily rethink my scheme.

And rethink it I did. I decided I’d make the books slightly smaller and go with a trilogy in the Lord of the Rings mould, you know, each book simply a devision of what is actually a single novel; i.e. this would not be three standalone volumes. But this presented problems as well, as there was a very uneven division as far as I could anticipate, and so I arrived at what will be the final form of publication: the serial novel.

Charles Dickens did it. So did Stephen King. Some indies have recently done so to great effect as well. And now your humble author will be doing so also. The Scion of Abacus (now the full story’s title as opposed to the title of the first of two volumes) will be released in six (possibly seven) parts of between 30,000 and 40,000 words (that’s anywhere from 90 to 160 pages depending on one’s page settings in Word!). Those are good, weighty chunks, I believe, and the story has some natural stopping points that serve to create a few intriguing cliffhangers.

The first two parts are done. Part three is now in the works. And once the school semester is over and grading is done, I should be able to type like a demon and perhaps get to the beginning of part five by mid-January, when I have to start thinking about teaching again.

I’m planning on a release schedule of one volume a month, and when the whole shebang is finished, there will also be a single-volume edition.

You will still be able to read the early draft version of the entire first part here on the website for free, but the version that will go up for sale will be heavily edited and–in some places–even unrecognizable. I always find it fascinating to look at early drafts of an author’s works, so perhaps you’ll get a kick out of these early chapters too.

Well, there you are. The cat’s out the bag. But I haven’t played all my cards yet, as I still have one particular duck to add to this row in the form of a brand new cover design for the new book.

And look at that: I’ve thrown in a mixed-metaphor-salad for you, free of charge!

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